Bjorn is hosting a Quadrille at D’Verse Poets.
And he has prompted us with the word “Eyes”.
This is my very first time writing a Quadrille. Hope it turns out great!
Your eyes and I
My eyes on you: restless and impatient,
my eyes on you sometimes happy and content ,
my eyes have few unshed tears and lots of complaints.
Your eyes have sold dreams for sure;
a dormant blue light in your eyes unfollows the streak of fire;
your arid eyes cultivating a substandard love,
But I need it though.
The substandard love wanders alone in my restless eyes on a lone blue night !

A soft, intimate verse…..
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Glad to hear that!
Thank you so much for lovely comment!😀🙏
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I enjoyed your Quadrille~~~
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I am so happy that you enjoyed it!
It means a lot to me❤🙏
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A lovely poem
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Thanks a ton, Sadje! ❤🌹
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You’re welcome
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Your comment was in spam list.
Glad I found early.
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It’s happening all the time to be my comments too.
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I see.
Once again, thank-you for visiting and love. 🙏❤
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My pleasure
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Sometimes you need those sweet looks, even when they have sold dreams unfulfilled
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I agree .
Thank-you Björn for sharing your thoughts. It means a lot to me. 🙏😀
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This is so very, very beautiful, Komaljeet!
But I don’t think it’s a quadrille because this is 70 words, and a quadrille is exactly 44 words 🙂
-David
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David , Thanking you for the beautiful appreciation❤🙏.
This was my first time writing a Quadrille. I made sure it contains 44 exact words.. Maybe, I missed it!
Thankyou again! 😀🙏
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I guess we can use same words more than once(repeat them) . Correct me, if I’m wrong!!
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https://wordcounter.net/
I use this website. It’s super helpful ❣️
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Thank you for recommending. 🙏
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A lovely write, Komaljeet. 🙏💞❤️
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Jeff, Thank you a lot 🙏❤🌻😊
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