My limp body consuming a
shadowy nook, and the darkness
within
me threatening the white light, Sun
moans over the reflections of
freshly
baked dreams in my promising eyes,
that are chased by headless human
figures.
Black mirror on my bathroom wall
never listens to white lies but
demands
truth. Tears in my eyes questions few
fake faces who first rejoice, then
console.
Murder at midnight ,rebirth at
sunrise. Still alive! I wonder
how? Why?
*********************
I somehow survive everytime,
two shades of gray on my face , when
one cries
I hear another’s laugh. I’m an
empath running down street with a
grilled smile.
Written for dVerse. Today’s host, Grace, says: write a Synchronicity poetry verse.
This poetry form is written in the first person revealing accidental yet seemingly synchronized events. As a poetry form, this consists of eight three-line stanzas in a syllable pattern of 8/8/2. This poetry type has no rhyme and is written in the first person with a twist. The twist is to be revealed within the last two stanzas.
Oh wow, such an evocative poem Komaljeet. Excellent
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Thanking you, Sadje for love.
🤗❤
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You’re welcome
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“grilled smile” seems to be the standard on the internet, no matter what’s really going on with a person. Scary image and, as Sadje said, an evocative poem.
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Choosing “grilled smile” over other alternatives was a pure emotion.
Thank you so much for reading and lovely comment. It means a lot to day. ❤😀
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You’re very welcome, Komaljeet.
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❤🌹
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I love that she is a survivor at the end! Thanks for joining in.
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She is stronger than anything!
Thanks for sharing your thoughts. 🙏
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Really evocative, hard-hitting..and that grilled smile…what an ending….
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I’m so happy to hear your thoughts.
Glad you liked it.❤🙏
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❤ Komaljeet ❤ – you rocked my world with that last stanza of yours!
Sincerely,
David
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Oh my!! This one is the best.
Thank-you so much for love and loveliest comment, David❤
Much appreciated 🙏🤗
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Beautifully expressed, Komaljeet. 🙏❤️
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I am humbled by your sweet response..
Thank-you so much! ❤🙏
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You’re most welcome. Always! Is my pleasure. 🙏❤️
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😀
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Grilled smile, how do you really find anything behind it.
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Well..grilled smile is an emotion and a really long saga to me, of hiding pain and sadness behind a smile. I have a grilled smile for some reasons though and I can’t help but smile with tears in eyes and pain in heart.
Thanking you for leaving comment. It means a lot to me! 🙏😀❤
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This is incredibly potent! I especially like; “Black mirror on my bathroom wall never listens to white lies but demands truth.” ❤️❤️
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Thanking you from the bottom of my heart for a wonderful comment.
This line is my fav as well. ❤🌹
Have a good day. 😃🌼
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