A mile apart from a rusty gateway,
stood a photogenic old man, in all black,
unshaven but well groomed.
His assertive fingers trembling,
so did a bunch of fresh lilies in his hands; all crimson and passionate.
A two or few tears in his eyes were in pure dilemma,
but drunken clouds had a cure.
Romantically pleasing wind escaping from the clutches of few old school copper-gray clouds
remained unnoticed by the lonely shadow
hanging past a decaying staircase.
“You said you loved the lilies, specially the red ones.“
Words mourning on his red lax lips finally attained peace as a warm japanese stream of salty water, gushing out of his sad eyes united with deliciousย velvety sand beneath.
Leaving playful lilies on a lifeless staircase,
he stood there numb for eternities with lilies and lies.
The blank space tryna engulf him into nothingness, grumbled, “tastless”.
And, the rusty gate to crowded cemetery slammed.

Written in response to Sadjeโs What Do You See #127 photo prompt.

Lovely poem dear
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Thanks a lotโค๐๐ผ
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no need dear
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Very poignant.
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that’s the word that came to my mind too, Punam! This is a lovely piece, Komaljeet.
Sincerely,
David
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David, Thanking you a lot for the lovely comment โค
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A lovely poem Komaljeet! You have set the scene so beautifully. Thanks for joining in
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โค๐ค Thanks a lot!
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Youโre welcome
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Loving this visual poem that slips by easy on the tongue!
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I am glad you liked the poemโค๐น
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Beautiful poem. ๐
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Thank you so much! โค๐
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There’s so much drama and the scene set out so beautifully through your words Komaljeet ๐๐
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Thank you so much for the kind words โคโค.
It means a lot to me. ๐ค๐น
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Very visual, very colourful… I can see the scene unfolding.
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I am happy to receive such a beautiful comment! Thanking you๐๐๐
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Oh, what a lovely piece
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Thanking you, Mich๐.
Sending you love and hugs๐ค๐โค
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Could mentally visualize this piece. Such a great write, full of drama and sadness stack within. The imagery is rich too. Well done. ๐
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I am grateful for leaving a wonderful comment. Glad you visualized this piece โจ. This means a lot to me.
Thanking you from the bottom of my heart ๐๐
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Feel most welcome, Komaljeet. ๐ ๐
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