a massive storm rolling in against
the proudly arched neck
of an aesthetically pleasing hourglass,
was playing against the boringly long time
words sitting on the hitherto weary folios kept whining
over the same old legendary saga
the gothic french hourglass
rebelled the time,
a solemn tear carried itself with grace
and sung the tale aloud
toxicated words fell down her lips
as a delightful sparkling dived into the blank space from the edge of an aging leaf
damp table reviving the dead rose petals
yelled at times
sweet air effaced the always stubborn malice that painted her lips; cold and harmless
a cold war broke
and her heart won again.
Very good , you are an amazing poetess.
Keep writing and showering your ideas /feelings this way.
God bless you
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A teacher’s comment and kind remark is indeed heavenly and a powerful one.
Thanks a lot, ma’am. 🙏
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Deeply appreciated your efforts young poetess
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Omg!!!
Thank you so much, Ma’am for the kind words!
Very happy to know you liked the work.
“Young poetess” indeed made my day❤🙏
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I love to read your poems ❤
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❤🦄🙏
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Profound imagery. Love the choice of words you’ve used here Komalijeet. Very well penned ❤️
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Oh !! I am humbled by your warm words.
Thanks a lot ma’am for reviewing this piece and liking it. 🙏❤
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Nice poem👌🏻💞
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